Fiction

Ghost Light (to be continued…)

By Susan Andrus 

The two sat at the very end of the first row bathed in the faint wash of the ghost light.

Mary wore a flow­ing robe and a feather boa. Her face was still but­tered with the thick stage make up, her lips painted in larger and a dark, har­lot red. She was a pretty woman, but just beyond lead­ing lady age. She had the appear­ance of being tired, but if asked, you’d have a hard time explain­ing exactly why.

Her com­pan­ion, Fritz, was a short, thin man with curly hair not quite cov­ered by his base­ball cap. He was wear­ing shorts, a Grate­ful Dead t-shirt and had a wrench attached to his belt. The story was that he’d fallen when he was hang­ing a light one night just a cou­ple of months, or exactly one year to the day, after a pro­duc­tion of the Scot­tish play had closed. He might have been okay… but every­one else had gone home for the night so no one had found him until ten o’clock the next morn­ing. And by then, well, every the­ater needs a ghost or two.

Mary was the one who’d appar­ently jumped from the roof of the the­ater in the early 1900’s after find­ing out her hus­band was hav­ing an affair with a stagehand.

Nei­ther of these sto­ries was exactly true, but as sto­ries do when in the hands of sto­ry­tellers, they had grown and the facts had changed. Fritz had died while hang­ing a light, but Mac­beth had actu­ally closed three years and five months before the acci­dent. As for Mary, her name was actu­ally Eliza and although her hus­band had had an affair with a stage­hand she hadn’t thrown her­self from the roof. Instead she divorced him and sev­eral years later she choked on a piece of hard candy after a performance.

Nei­ther of them minded the more dra­matic ver­sions of their demises. (To be continued…)

About the author

Susan Andrus is the founder of the Consortium of the Creative Nudge. She can always use a nudge. She lives in Bozeman, Mont.

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  • kglynn
    Susan, this is really great! Stories do change like that. Even though your title hints at what this is about, I didn't get that they were ghosts until halfway through, which is perfect. Last night trick or treating in the dark, even the parents who weren't dressed up in the historic district seemed like spirits (I was one of them). Keep this stuff coming!
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This text was written in response to the Ghosts nudge and was published on October 31, 2008.